Cruel, cold, and frosty was how you were,
When we parted.
I hardly remember anything of that fateful day,
My memories foggy with time.
Unwillingly do I think about you now,
For you hinder my vision,
Suffocating me and blurring my eyes from seeing clearly,
You do more harm than good.
Hazy and misty are my thoughts about you,
Dulled and diminished.
Time is indeed a thief, for it has stolen,
Whatever I had left of you.
time is the thief nice metaphor
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Thank you! 🙂
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May out time with loved ones not fade out like a fog.
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Lovely thought. I hope so too.
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Me too. Great poem. Hey I hope you don’t mind but I’d like to invite you to my blog at http://www.insanitybeautiful.wordpress.com
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Lovely blog!!!
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Thanks!
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Hey, that’s what bloggers are for, right?
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I love the thieving time metaphor too, great idea and a very strong ending.
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Thank you for your kind words!
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I wonder if I am the only one who read this and found it amusing? :D. I felt like someone told a pass love interest “gone bout your business” but of course upside down Madvanthi, you did it in a more sophisticated way.
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Thank you? I really don’t know what else to say. 🙂
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Nothing more is required :).
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LOL 🙂
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Reminds me of days I was late to work or appointments because I found ice on my windows in an area where you’d least expect it. I’d chip it off with a CD case I found in the backseat. Took a lot of time. The CD usually brought back memories. Nice job!
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Oh my, that must have been some experience…
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